When it became a big deal
This is a true story: It might happen to anyone
It was getting dark. The road was wet and slippery. Driving back towards the city seemed a never ending journey. With this task at hand we couldn’t have proceed anywhere else. Finally, we reached the building. Took it out of the car and went inside. It was cold and quite. Now, they wanted us to put it in a bag. It was taken to an underground dungeon, where it was covered in a white cloth. With red stains gleaming all around the body we careful took it outside, lest something breaks.
My mobile phone rang constantly, trying to know our where abouts and what was happening? A bit irritated and a bit nervous I borrowed a pen from a stranger, my hands shaky as I wrote on the white sheet. Finally, it was placed on the weighing machine. With a sheepish smile the clerk behind the desk looked at me and said, "Char So Bees. Hmmm. Char So Bees." Then checking his computer he finally said, "Rs.640". I gave my debit card and he pointed to the board in front of him – Cash Only.
Digging into our pockets we collected every single penny, but it was not enough. My friend Sanjally, said, “I knew this was going to happen. I have to take the final note out. My horoscope is always right.” Digging into the deepest pocket of her purse, she gave me 100 rupee note. I gave all, the 1 & 5 rupee coins and soiled notes (not to forget a 100 rupee note feeling a king amongst them), to the clerk. He looked at me and as I was contemplating whether I too should start taking my horoscope a little more seriously, he started counting the money and said, “It will take a maximum of 7 day for this courier to reach Australia”. What’s that!! I thought, there is a minimum time period for such services. But this was the Indian Postal Services. One of the worlds most trusted and respected postal services.
So, that's how I spent the eve of 31st Dec’08. After picking up two friends from
Good Night and Good Luck.
Comments
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Coming back to the track, kudos to the effort of attaching a suspense and spooky feel to a simple thing like a COURIER!!
And last but not the least, YOu end it such that some corner of the mind doesn't want it to end.. It says.."What more" or "What Next" or "Party me bhi kuch hua kya??" or somethin that should continue..
Great!! ALL THE BEST.. Waiting for More from you.
I find horoscopes funny especially when they make all cancerians fall in love with all Gemini's. Or when every librian is going to suffer poor health in may.
The world population is about 7 billion.So how does Mr Bejan(no life) club about 6 million people in every sunsign category and predict their future everyday. Facinating it isn't it
The article mocks proudly at all the astrologers. Also i loved your parcel and i hope your friend at Australia did too.
Great piece Vishal keep going
I sure will try to right better
And thanxx for all the appreciation.